it is raining – hear
rain purifies – did you hear
the tears of the year
feel the raindrops on our skin
purifying us within.
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November 27, 2016 at 02:28
Aw I adore this.
November 27, 2016 at 05:45
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November 27, 2016 at 08:13
November 27, 2016 at 08:48
November 28, 2016 at 10:54
Raenga is a Japanese format of collaboration between 3 or 4 poets on a single theme.
Here there are twin themes of rain and purity by one poet.
“Tears of the year
are felt or heard like rain drops
Love these words…. hearing, seeing , touching, feeling , time , change and philosophy
all are interwoven in to 3 lines….
Brevilty and brilliance ….
November 28, 2016 at 11:35
as i bow! thanks for your kind words. true, renga is usually written by 3 or 4 poets, but that will be one, two, too many – “two is company.” so, perhaps the one to whom this is dedicated will create renga (love) poetry with me.
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