i taste the tanginess of your tears in my soul
tender teardrops that stir my soul
i hear the cautious cravings in your mind
crystallizing cravings that move my mind
i see the dainty desires in your hands
deserving desires to hold heartening hands
i smell the hermetic hopes in your heart
high hopes that hide happily in your heart
i touch the sentient smiles on your face
sweet smiles that show me my place
how else can i love you better and calm my wild
soul unless by sensing the unseen that sends your senses wild.
(dedicated to the water bearer)
fkregieblog 2016.
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November 28, 2016 at 18:07
I always thought sixth sense is a natural culmination of all five senses. Evolution of all the senses is the sixth sense. This poem is deeply spiritual and sensual at the same time , so difficult to appreciate in words …can be felt, cant be said……
I love that line ” I smell the hermetic hopes”
Renunciation is not honest if it is because of pain or death….. true renunciation is another meaning to life and not an escape from life……it should not be a form of suicide ….or attenuated life.
“Wild flowers smile with life – anonymous”
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November 28, 2016 at 18:46
thanks for reading and your insight. i agree, the sixth sense might be a natural culmination of all (popular) five senses. however, whereas the five senses rely on proofs, the sixth sense is mainly intuitive – sensing things that are not obvious using extra sensory perception, for instance, sensing the presence of ghosts. i take this opportunity to note the other six (unpopular) senses – acceleration/joint motion (kinaesthesia), balance (equilibrioception), differences in temperature (thermoception), direction (magnetoception), pain (nociception) and sense of time. maybe we should be talking about the twelfth sense here …
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November 28, 2016 at 18:54
Ha Ha …. You sound like parietal cortex the area which integrates all senses. Including the sense of self.
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November 28, 2016 at 18:57
i deserve that comeback. thirteen senses then. always a delight to exchange ideas with you
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November 28, 2016 at 19:16
Sense and sensibility are different entities. All of us are blessed with senses but our sensibilities are because we chose to develop them ….
Thank you for being you with all your sensibilities.
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November 28, 2016 at 19:24
thank you! appreciate that.
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November 28, 2016 at 20:22
Oh wow.
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November 28, 2016 at 21:25
thanks, Sarah!
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November 29, 2016 at 14:58
i taste the tanginess of your tears in my soul
tender teardrops that stir my soul,
beautiful lines, this is so deep, l like it. thank you for sharing Fani-K
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November 29, 2016 at 15:04
thanks, Goody.
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